Inside of me I am Outside of me And beside myselfBy Heather Sergeant
Like tables turned In a familiar room I bash myself And bruised Search for something I know
I hope I recognise it.
I like it. How old is Heather?
"A Poem" is a crummy title, though; in most good poetry, the title sets the mood for what is to follow. Now, of course, I can't pretend to know what was in her mind, but some ideas come to mind:
The Quest
Inside a Klein bottle
Familiarity
Return of the labyrinth
Encourage her to come up with a good title. It's harder than it first appears.
